Luke Giles
English 1-1A
2/6/2020
I was coming out of school on a Friday and only having Saturday, Sunday, and Monday off. I was ready my birthday was the Sunday it was going to be cool. All my friends will be coming over then we will be heading to Laser Mania!!!
Saturday was ok my parents were gone though all day so I just sat on the couch to watch some TV and eat a lot of snacks that we had. I sat there all-day thinking about when my parents would get home but as usual, I still went to bed at 10:00. But this time I didn’t I stayed up until 11:27. I kept thinking what would happen if I were to stay up when my parents would get home.
Would they get mad at me if they see me up past 10:00. But I still stayed up to see if they would come home but I ended up sleeping on the couch. I woke up by my mom who was shaking me and calling out my name. I opened my eyes and nodded and walked to my bathroom.
I brushed my teeth took a shower got dressed and headed to the living room. My mom and asked me what I wanted for breakfast I replied “I would like two eggs (scrambled) two pancakes and two sausages with a cup of milk.
I ate everything and drinked my milk and all my friends started to show up so I got dressed and ready to go to laser mania. Once we got to laser mania everyone was so excited including me, we went in and the suits were waiting there for us including the guns. We all got geared up and played for a while then it was 4:37 so we went home.
When we got to my house, we all sat down around the table when the lights turned off then there was a light coming from the kitchen it was mom and dad coming out of the kitchen with a cake that was all lit up with candles. Everyone began to sing the Happy birthday song I was so happy they told me to make a wish so I did they asked what the wish was I told them I can’t if I do it won’t come true so we ate the cake. It was getting late so me and my friends went to the living room and we slept in sleeping bags.
While I was crawling in my sleeping bag, I was hoping that my wish would come true I kept saying it over and over until I fell asleep, I woke up the next morning and yet it was Monday but not the next Monday I looked older than before I was so confused why was I older and why was I in a bed in a different looking bedroom. I walked out of the bedroom wondering what happened then a dog came running to me but didn’t attack.
English 1-1A
2/6/2020
I was coming out of school on a Friday and only having Saturday, Sunday, and Monday off. I was ready my birthday was the Sunday it was going to be cool. All my friends will be coming over then we will be heading to Laser Mania!!!
Saturday was ok my parents were gone though all day so I just sat on the couch to watch some TV and eat a lot of snacks that we had. I sat there all-day thinking about when my parents would get home but as usual, I still went to bed at 10:00. But this time I didn’t I stayed up until 11:27. I kept thinking what would happen if I were to stay up when my parents would get home.
Would they get mad at me if they see me up past 10:00. But I still stayed up to see if they would come home but I ended up sleeping on the couch. I woke up by my mom who was shaking me and calling out my name. I opened my eyes and nodded and walked to my bathroom.
I brushed my teeth took a shower got dressed and headed to the living room. My mom and asked me what I wanted for breakfast I replied “I would like two eggs (scrambled) two pancakes and two sausages with a cup of milk.
I ate everything and drinked my milk and all my friends started to show up so I got dressed and ready to go to laser mania. Once we got to laser mania everyone was so excited including me, we went in and the suits were waiting there for us including the guns. We all got geared up and played for a while then it was 4:37 so we went home.
When we got to my house, we all sat down around the table when the lights turned off then there was a light coming from the kitchen it was mom and dad coming out of the kitchen with a cake that was all lit up with candles. Everyone began to sing the Happy birthday song I was so happy they told me to make a wish so I did they asked what the wish was I told them I can’t if I do it won’t come true so we ate the cake. It was getting late so me and my friends went to the living room and we slept in sleeping bags.
While I was crawling in my sleeping bag, I was hoping that my wish would come true I kept saying it over and over until I fell asleep, I woke up the next morning and yet it was Monday but not the next Monday I looked older than before I was so confused why was I older and why was I in a bed in a different looking bedroom. I walked out of the bedroom wondering what happened then a dog came running to me but didn’t attack.
Summary reflection
1. Explain the process you went through to write this paper. Please be specific.
I read the short little summary of the sentence and I typed what I thought.
2. Is this paper narrative, expository, or argumentative? How do you know?
Narrative because there is only a person talking which is you.
3. Tell me one thing you learned from writing this paper.
That some stories are hard to write and some aren't.
4. What are you particularly proud of in this paper?
The good writing section.
5. What does this paper show readers about you?
That I could potentially have a good brain.
1. Explain the process you went through to write this paper. Please be specific.
I read the short little summary of the sentence and I typed what I thought.
2. Is this paper narrative, expository, or argumentative? How do you know?
Narrative because there is only a person talking which is you.
3. Tell me one thing you learned from writing this paper.
That some stories are hard to write and some aren't.
4. What are you particularly proud of in this paper?
The good writing section.
5. What does this paper show readers about you?
That I could potentially have a good brain.